Loved the video -- brought back memories of the 1800 or so hours I flew out of Bowman myself. Turning base at the Lincoln Tower is a particular memory.
Kinda cool with the head-mounted camera so we can see where you're looking all the time, including watching the wingtips during pull out from the hangar and clearing before cranking. I also like seeing the headset off for the start so you can hear the engine, and seeing you check for traffic at each taxiway intersection.
Comments on the flight:
You were initially overshooting the left turn to final (and undershot the turn from the right side) with the left crosswind, although it got better later. Getting a good start is really helpful in making a better pattern. The other thing that improved through the flight was holding the left wing down after you corrected to centerline so you'd stay there -- earlier, you were tending to drop the wind to slip to the left to get on centerline, then leveling the wings and drifting right again.
The "s-turns" on the runway weren't that exciting, at least from my keyboard perspective, although it seemed that as you slowed, you didn't compensate for the reduced rudder effectiveness and that may be why you weather-vaned to the left as you slowed, especially on the first 3 or 4 landings. As you slow, the weathervaning effect increases while rudder effectiveness decreases, so there's a constantly increasing rudder displacement needed to keep going straight.
All in all, looked real good to me for TW lesson #2.