My publisher has expressed an interest in Stationery Flight Part II, Kamikaze. I am quite comfortable with most of the material, but I am still worried about the introduction. I am trying to write something encyclopedic without having it read like an encyclopedia. I was hoping some of you might give it a read and tell me what's wrong with it. Of paramount importance are errors of fact, if I got something wrong. But I would also like to know if it reads well. I figure if pilots can read this and not get too bored I may be on the right track. Many, many thanks.